Hey!
Help!
I'm in a conundrum!
People want this
And that
Then this
But I don't want
Any of that
Not one bit
So I just sand then sit
While you're thrown a fit
So I flip you the bird
Like I'm cookin' chicken
With a spatula
Yah I'm flippin'!
So help?
Middle school rookie writers trying to make sense of chaos at the base of the Rocky Mountains
Monday, March 6, 2017
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8 comments:
Haha! I loved the way you added some humor tweeds the end. Where is this person? To me it seems like a fast food restaurant?
I think the main storyline was about selfishness and greed. It was a bit confusing to read but besides that it was great.
I really like the main idea in this! Also, I really enjoy the word choice. Keep up the good writing!
This peom is a really good one. I would like to know where you got this idea from.
This is funny. How do you get the ideas? Do they come from other people or are you putting down ideas then make them great!?
I wonder where you got your inspiration.
I love this poem
This was oddly funny! I really enjoyed it, I feel like there's a hidden meaning to it!
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