Middle school rookie writers trying to make sense of chaos at the base of the Rocky Mountains
I love how deep it is. With just those simple words I can relate.
Great job on this it's really deep, and well written.
I really like the style you used; how you made each stanza flow to the other.
' His eyes wet and full of the truth ' that single line alone sounds so powerful and true. I love it.
I really liked how you illustrated that the truth isn't always easy to believe.
Great way to put the word on the page.
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8th grade a time of turmoil with all of the drama good and bad we take off to high school we were the top dogs of campus no we are back down...
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I love how deep it is. With just those simple words I can relate.
Great job on this it's really deep, and well written.
I really like the style you used; how you made each stanza flow to the other.
' His eyes wet and full of the truth ' that single line alone sounds so powerful and true. I love it.
I really liked how you illustrated that the truth isn't always easy to believe.
Great way to put the word on the page.
Post a Comment