I am scrambling around,
Trying to stay calm
My mindset is intact
But I feel off my mental track
For if I can keep up the pace,
Then I am to be slapped in the face!
Go go go!
Don't stop don't stop don't stop
Hurry hurry hurry,
Let's get on the move!
C'mon c'mon c'mon
Speed is on our side!
Do this! Do that! Keep on moving!
Go go go!
15 comments:
This is me with homework at the last minute. I absolutely love this story
I love this! It's one of those things you read that could mean many different things, which makes the readers read a little more in-depth than usual. Good job! :)
There could be many situations to put in this short poem which I like a lot. Good job!
This is me with all homework. Lol
This was really funny to think about because lots of people relate, especially with homework. I too can relate! Great Piece!
This is what I'm like when I'm doing homework! I love how you worded it! Awesome job!
This is so true about the world today! Everybody is rushing to go places and nobody will stop and take a deep breath. Great job!
I regret to inform you all how stupidly true this is. Great post!
I liked this because this is how I feel in school everyday. I also enjoyed the fact that it can be applied to many situations.
This is me writing an essay.
This could be a really awesome song.
I wonder if someone is chasing them. Maybe the Taco Bell manager caught them stealing tacos.
This gave me a sense of speed like trying to hurry through life.
this is the story of the last two weeks of school.
This reminds me of track, no matter what you have to keep moving, and school, that also fits into this, great writing.
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