Broken on the floor
Crumpled in a ball
Tear stained cheeks
Hurt from the fall
Pained from the actions
Presented without care
Tortured by thoughts
Struck with a stare
Confused with the truth
Hurt by the lies
Now seeing the stone
In those green eyes
Torn from hatred
Patched with the numb
Though the feeling of nothing
Only fills some
Feeling scared
Yet somehow peace
The feeling of doubt
Will eventually cease
Falling to the abyss
Darkness and shame
Few will win
Though all play a game
Insecurities appear
Tearing apart
All that was left
Of this broken heart
The sun will shine
Struggling to seep through
Though after the darkness
Light will renew
Spreading out
Covering all grounds
Darkness will diminish
Though linger around
In the weakest times
Light fights its way through
Although just in a shadow
Darkness is ready too.
11 comments:
same.
I also enjoyed them sick rhymes.
I love your poems, they obviously reflect things that happen in your life.
I really like all the rhymes, and I like the format of this poem. Nice job!
This is a really cool thingy you got here, I feel as though plenty can relate to it on all levels. Good work mate
I like the format and rhyme. The ending is cool because light cannot exist without darkness.
Great rhymes!
Wow, I love it. Spelling looks pretty good. I actually read it a second time as a song, and it could totally be an awesome one! Nice work!
Wow, this is a really deep and amazing poem. This is so amazing, left me dazzled. You're an amazing poet!
This is great, it might actually be some people's lives, which would be sad, but it's the truth. Great job!
I like the rhyme in this poem. I like the way you placed the words down the page.
Loved the way it rhymed
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