Red
Blood
Heat
Passion
Power demanded of the people
The flame of hatred
Red
Resolute
Adored
Shunned
Symbol of power
Symbol of war
Associated with evil
Inferior
Yet meaningful
All that I hope to be
All that I hope not to be
Red
A sunset
Warm campfires
Rosy cheeks on a cold winter day
A colour
My favorite colour
Red
11 comments:
I like how this is really eye catching. Between the red text and the spacing. I loved it.
The repition and choice of vocabulary makes this poem interesting and makes it one of the more intellectually stimulating poems. The choice of indenting and spacing is also very interesting.
I like the display of the words. It makes the story more enjoyable then if it would had have stanzas. Also I like all the big and strong words that you used. Great poem.
I love the way you set up the lines and used different colors. Very creative.
The spacing and the red blend well. Color is spelled color in English. But im British-English so i spell it colour too. Good job.
You took the simple word 'red' to a deeper level. It was an excellent piece that flowed well.
I had never thought about the many meanings of red before. This was very eye opening. Just like green can be the color of nature and beauty, however it can also represent acid or disease.
The spacing and red color is really eye catching. I also enjoy the format. Good work.
I love the red colored words. It make this peace of writing pop out. Also the format you put all of the words is really awesome.
I love how you ascent every red word with red. Also loved the format cought my eye.
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