Middle school rookie writers trying to make sense of chaos at the base of the Rocky Mountains
Friday, March 3, 2017
patriots
Patriots running onto the field
All the fans screaming.
Touch down patriots.
Running down the field
I was so excited.
Other sideline in disappointment
Touch down for the third time.
Screaming crowds rush onto the field.
Even though it is very short, I cans till hear you and the fans screaming in my head. You explained it very well, it reminds me of me when I watch my favorite team score. Good Job!
8 comments:
Nice poem. Great win for the patriots.
Even though it is very short, I cans till hear you and the fans screaming in my head. You explained it very well, it reminds me of me when I watch my favorite team score. Good Job!
You explained very well what happens whe a team scores.
Even though it is short in length, it really expresses a lot, and I could imagine this happening. Nice job1
I really like your accrastic poem of the Patriots. It really shows what happens at a football game.
I really like the poem. Great win for the Patriots, but the Broncos are better.
Nice poem. And it's even better that it's about the best NFL team ever
I haven't seen a poem about sports before, particularly football. I liked it though, its new and interesting.
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