Middle school rookie writers trying to make sense of chaos at the base of the Rocky Mountains
Mystery, I like it. It has a good ring to it to, good job.
This could point to two scenarios. But it sounds good and fits together really well.
I liked your use of suttle rhyming and the mystery within the poem. The entire piece is a question which leaves the reader in thought.
Great job rhyming it has a great ring to it
I like that it is a mystery.
I like the rhyme and repitition factor in this. Good work.
I liked the shortness of it, i usually would never say that but in this case it was great. It flowed nicely and you did a good job of not rambling. Please write more like these!
It is a very short but sweat. I really think you used the write amount of words. Not to much but not to little.
Nice ring loved how it flowed all together. Loved how short it was.
Every girls worst fear/nightmare
Will he come? you should do a part two to this! i love your formatting!
I hope there is a part to for this. I like how short it is because it explains well
This is super small, but it is a great piece of writing. I think you should write more about it!
I feel like this story can describe many different situations.
I like how it's so short but captures so many words
The picture this paints is very vivid! It's short, but says a lot. Really great work!
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Mystery, I like it. It has a good ring to it to, good job.
This could point to two scenarios. But it sounds good and fits together really well.
I liked your use of suttle rhyming and the mystery within the poem. The entire piece is a question which leaves the reader in thought.
Great job rhyming it has a great ring to it
I like that it is a mystery.
I like the rhyme and repitition factor in this. Good work.
I liked the shortness of it, i usually would never say that but in this case it was great. It flowed nicely and you did a good job of not rambling. Please write more like these!
It is a very short but sweat. I really think you used the write amount of words. Not to much but not to little.
Nice ring loved how it flowed all together. Loved how short it was.
Every girls worst fear/nightmare
Will he come? you should do a part two to this! i love your formatting!
I hope there is a part to for this. I like how short it is because it explains well
This is super small, but it is a great piece of writing. I think you should write more about it!
I feel like this story can describe many different situations.
I like how it's so short but captures so many words
The picture this paints is very vivid! It's short, but says a lot. Really great work!
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