People walking side by side.
But everyone had a phone in their hand
And no one stopped to enjoy the land.
No one ever liked to talk
All they ever did was walk.
With phones in their hands and headphones on their ears
Made all of us rocks fall into tears.
13 comments:
I like the truth in this poem. It's upsetting that things are actually like this.
I loved how smoothly the poem flowed. It was short and sweet. Nice job!
Wow! This really describes the current world. It's sad that things like this happens. Great job!
I really like the sound of the poem you wrote. When I read this poem it reminds me of New York City. I thought this when i was read about the people walking side by side.
So true, easy to read also.
A rocks life sounds horrible. Haha
I like how the poem was so smooth and it was great!👏😀
I like how the poem flows so naturally, good job and I hope you do more honest poems like this
Thats very true but only for some people. but that only describes half of the population.
This is so sad. But it is so true that everybody has phone in the hands of headphones in their ears!
It's sad to see what society has become, though, in some ways it's a good thing. I liked how simple, but meaningful this was!
I like the title you put, it was like the opposite of a birds eye view! And it's true, people can't seem to put their phones down!
That has a good rhyme to it. Good job
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