When you've lost your way
Follow those who have shot for the moon
Because youll be among the stars
Infinate directions, unlimited paths
Lest you're blind, you've no excuse
Find the brightest light
And put one foot in front of the other
7 comments:
I love your piece of writing. I'm really fond of the way you used the word "lest".
I love the message this sends, albeit a little sad, it's in a way optimistic. So many good quotes in here!
I love how you inspire people to surround themselves with people who have shot for the moon, and to always put a foot in front of the other. You did an amazing job. This makes me think of what my mother used to say to me, she used to say " My dear child always follow your heart and shoot for the moon."
This poem is really beautiful. You used a lot of great words, and a few quotes, which I like. Good job!
Wow. That was good. I loved the ending. How did you get lost?
This was really good and inspirational. The ending was my favorite part. How did you get the inspiration to write this?
For those asking where i got inspiration for this. I came up with all of this myself except for the shoot for the moon part. That being said i opologize if i took some unknowingly. I got the last part from a song by F.U.N. called one foot. But my main inspiration comes from a poet named Shane Koyczan.
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