Welcome to these woods
These woods
My woods
Your woods
Please enjoy your stay
But only under the light of day
When the sun sets behind the mountains
And the stars come out to play
I pray
I pray
I pray
You go back from where you come
Because with the setting sun
The skin walker comes to have fun
It rips you limb from limb
The only one who hears your screams is me
I must leave you in misery
Your blood stains the ground
As pagans gather around
They ring their bells and summon hell
And infect these woods with pain
So be wary during the day
To not let time slip away
As day turns to night
You'll be given such a fright
As the skin walker draws near
And slits your throat ear to ear
6 comments:
i like the horror factor in this one. makes it settle better.
I like the details and intensity in this poem. Good job!
So scary! Yikes! Seriously, I'm terrified. It's like some of you guys have been watching way too much Supernatural or something........
Good poem and it seems like a creepy pasta
I like how it started out calm and peaceful and halfway through it became very intense. I really like your use of words and how you made them fit together so the reader can imagine it. I find your writing fascinating because I don't see how it can be that good.
I love the horror you have going on here! It was very creepy, but I couldn't stop reading it.
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