Middle school rookie writers trying to make sense of chaos at the base of the Rocky Mountains
Thursday, February 2, 2017
1.30.17
She did it to make people angry
She did it to make them scared
She did it because she was alone
She did it to make them care
She did it to make them hurt
Like they had done to her,
But most of all she did it
To make her happy and reassured.
7 comments:
Anonymous
said...
Wow! This story sounds like a girl getting bullied, this story is really deep. Especially the lines that say "she did it to make them hurt, like they had done to her.
I like this poem because of how it rhymes in the last sentences. This is like what Kevin Manning said, it is like "they" are bullying her. This is a very deep poem. She did it...
7 comments:
Wow! This story sounds like a girl getting bullied, this story is really deep. Especially the lines that say "she did it to make them hurt, like they had done to her.
I like this poem because of how it rhymes in the last sentences. This is like what Kevin Manning said, it is like "they" are bullying her. This is a very deep poem. She did it...
I can see the pain in this person and it maybe sounds like she's getting bullied? Truly amazing.
I can almost feel the pain she's feeling. I like how it's kinda a mystery
I like how you gave us reasons for why she did it, but not what she did. In many stories everyone is focused on the victim, but this one is reversed.
I really like how it is a mystery. It's very deep but I like the way it is written.
This is a awesome poem! I like how you included what she did for herself. Not just anybody else but her too.
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