Tuesday, February 7, 2017

The Clown

The clown standing there in the light just thinking about what he has done. Regretting every second of it. All the lives he took all the hearts he broke. Not worth it thinking to himself. Why he had done this in the first place. Constantly thinking about the blood, guts, and gore trying to get his mind on something other that death. He was always a strange person who you just didn't know what he was thinking all the time. His mother always knew he would have done dark things in his future like this. His dad was never in his life. He left when he was about three or so. He dealt with his anger in strange ways like constantly screaming in his room. They tried to get him therapy, but it never worked. He was always a dark person through his life, but his mom would have never have dreamed he would do something like this. To be continued!

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Very solid mate. Love all the adjectives and sad/morbid sentences. I have a tip though: maybe try to not put a 'to be continued' or at least not an exclamation mark at the end, that takes away the dark mood and replaces it with a height spirted mood. Other than that it was well written!

Anonymous said...

Nice story, can't wait for the second part.

8th grade a time of turmoil with all of the drama good and bad we take off to high school we were the top dogs of campus no we are back down...