I live in Colorado
He is elderly
I am youthful
He looks down at me
I look up at him
He talks to me
I listen
Middle school rookie writers trying to make sense of chaos at the base of the Rocky Mountains
8th grade a time of turmoil with all of the drama good and bad we take off to high school we were the top dogs of campus no we are back down...
4 comments:
Lovely! The simplicity and length is perfect! This reminds me of my grandpa and our height difference. Do you see him often?
Wow! Even though this is a short piece of writing, it packs a powerful message. I just recently wrote a poem about my grandfather on "In Line For The Insane".
That was really good even though it is short. I like how you make is sound like you are so different but at the end it makes you also sound the same.
I abslutly love how you wrote this poem! You did it with style. nice job!
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