Thursday, February 2, 2017

The Grandfather

He lives in Kansas
I live in Colorado 
He is elderly
I am youthful 
He looks down at me 
I look up at him
He talks to me 
I listen 

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Lovely! The simplicity and length is perfect! This reminds me of my grandpa and our height difference. Do you see him often?

Anonymous said...

Wow! Even though this is a short piece of writing, it packs a powerful message. I just recently wrote a poem about my grandfather on "In Line For The Insane".

Anonymous said...

That was really good even though it is short. I like how you make is sound like you are so different but at the end it makes you also sound the same.

Anonymous said...

I abslutly love how you wrote this poem! You did it with style. nice job!

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