Thursday, May 18, 2017

2.28.17

The broken eyes of the weak.
The stony eyes of the strong.
No matter the effort we put in things,
It always comes out wrong.

The rejection boils within,
Strung to your core.
You're given a chance,
But the rejection can't be ignored.

13 comments:

Anonymous said...

I love the flow of this. This is a really great poem!

Anonymous said...

Wow loved that sooooooo much. It is perfectly perfect

Anonymous said...

Wow! Great job! You did a great job on making things rhyme. You are great at writing poems!🙂🙃

Anonymous said...

This was really good! Wow! I enjoyed it so much!

Anonymous said...

Ahh! This is fantastic! It made me so happy because of how fabulous the writing was. You my friend, are an amazing poet.

Anonymous said...

Great word use! It really shows how we are all alike and how we can all relate to each other! Great write!

Anonymous said...

I love the vocabulary. It was deep.

Anonymous said...

The vocabulary was great in this! Good job!

Anonymous said...

I love how everything rymes.

Anonymous said...

wow! Amazing poem!

Anonymous said...

Really great 👍 love the flow.

Anonymous said...

it good poem great job

Anonymous said...

Oh... wow.

I didn't know something so short could be so impressive and could make you really start to question the strongest people in your life.

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