Thursday, May 18, 2017

MAMA

"Mama?" Carrie suspiciously asked as her hands shook the planchette as it had finished spelling MAMA it was only Carrie and Josh's hand on the planchette and Jerry, Lena, and Cassidy was in the abandoned house on 5th street that was coverd in graffiti on that late Thursday night. Jerry cowardly asked lena to search up if Mama was a person that died here or is it trying to tell them something but Lena's phone glitched then died. Lena just zoned out on one spot on the ceiling that was weirdly just a white blank space.

As Carrie was terrified and wanted to take her trembling hands off the planchette and go home butwas paralyzed in fright "you guys i dont know about this anymore!" Carrie said desperately  "that all phones glitch and it was just a weird coincidence" Josh said trying to calm carrie down. Carrie and Cassidy switched off so Cassidy was now playing with the ouiji board.


 Josh and Cassidy have been asking random questions for fifteen minutes now and no response or anything weird in the house until Lena's phone beeped. As Lena looked at phone her eyes widened as Lena drops her phone out of fright and on the floor Josh sees what has him shook as he reads out loud " One possibility is a demon that is associated with the entity known as Zozo. There are three demons associated with Zozo, one of which is called Mama." when Josh finished reading that the planchette moved rapidly to the Z then O then repeated once more.


 Carrie was shocked and was just about to cry when she was struck with a brick and her head gushed with blood and on her face were three scratches. 


Lena screaming trying to help her best friend suddenly just stoped and glared at the celing and on the old blank spot was the numbers 6 6 6. 



To be continued......................

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Very mysterious and suspenseful. Makes me want to read the rest. Good job, I love it! :)

Anonymous said...

I freaking love ouji board stories. Fantastic job! I'm waiting for the second part!

Anonymous said...

This is a great story with excellent style! I like how you took something inanimate and made it scary and exillerating!

Anonymous said...

i want to see the "to be continued" of this. This was a very straight forward story.

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