Middle school rookie writers trying to make sense of chaos at the base of the Rocky Mountains
Damn. This is good. I really like this. It is so simple and authentic. And it's sort of gives the reader their own meaning of the poem. Great job!
This is really cool and I enjoyed reading this
Awesome. I wanted there to be more.
This is a really cool short story, awesome job!
This poem really puts the universe into perspective! It gives the stars a human-like tone! Great work!
Can we get stories like this for all of the celestial beings?
This is a great story! It's different.
Great! That was amazing. You should wright more
This is so creative and cool.
I feel like the so called sun king is almost a villain more then a hero.
who is the sun king
The personification was wonderful and it's amazing to see that even universal underdogs are some of the most important. Whether it's our sun, or someone in class. This is inspiring and I hope you continue writing amazingly.
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8th grade a time of turmoil with all of the drama good and bad we take off to high school we were the top dogs of campus no we are back down...
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Damn. This is good. I really like this. It is so simple and authentic. And it's sort of gives the reader their own meaning of the poem. Great job!
This is really cool and I enjoyed reading this
Awesome. I wanted there to be more.
This is a really cool short story, awesome job!
This poem really puts the universe into perspective! It gives the stars a human-like tone! Great work!
Can we get stories like this for all of the celestial beings?
This is a great story! It's different.
Great! That was amazing. You should wright more
This is so creative and cool.
I feel like the so called sun king is almost a villain more then a hero.
who is the sun king
The personification was wonderful and it's amazing to see that even universal underdogs are some of the most important. Whether it's our sun, or someone in class. This is inspiring and I hope you continue writing amazingly.
Post a Comment